replay 2

zdunno03's avatarLeonard Durso

there come those times
in the day at night
when you replay moments
adjust positions
fine-tune dialogue
edit in your favor
those words
you shouldn’t have said
and you think yes
this is the way
it should have might have
played
and a different life
than the one you’re living
causes that lump
that tear
there

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17 thoughts on “replay 2

  1. My inner editor tends toward “awfulizing” whatever I did/said in an interaction that didn’t go quite how I wanted it to or thought it would – at times it makes the replay not at all enjoyable UGH! You do put words together nicely!

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