By The Winding River II by Tu Fu

Everywhere petals are flying
And Spring is fading. Ten thousand
Atoms of sorrow whirl away
In the wind. I will watch the last
Flowers as they fade, and ease
The pain in my heart with wine.
Two kingfishers mate and nest in
The ruined river pavilion.
Stone unicorns, male and female,
Guard the great tomb near the park.
After the laws of their being,
All creatures pursue happiness.
Why have I let an official
Career swerve me from my goals?

translated by Kenneth Rexroth

11 thoughts on “By The Winding River II by Tu Fu

    • It’s from Rexroth’s One Hundred Poems From The Chinese, which I bought in 1967, along with One Hundred Poems From The Japanese in SBX (Student Book Exchange) in Bowling Green. The first 2 books that introduced me to Asian poetry. And they have been with me in every house/apartment/hovel I lived in every since.

  1. don’t know when this was written, but it’s timeless. I see the careful punctuation in this, and wonder what your thoughts are about punctuation in poetry. I’ve been a bit inclined to ignore it, and I’m starting to think that’s not good?

    • This was written in the 8th Century. As for the use of punctuation, that’s really up to the individual writer and the individual poem. Sometimes I feel a need to insert it and other times, depending on line breaks, it isn’t necessary or can even get in the way. I think I usually try to follow the old axiom: content determines form. So if it is necessary for understanding the content of the piece, then I use it. But if not, then I don’t. And that seems to work for me.

    • A good question. I find work enters into my prose more often than the poetry. Maybe I need more space to deal with that topic. Poems are like bricks in a house whereas prose is the house. Maybe work, being such a large part of our lives, needs a room or two of its own in that house. And for some people, it is the whole house, or, at least, one of the houses we might have occupied for a while in our life.

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